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My Fallen Angel
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 06:09:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Look at you
My Fallen Angel
You are the
One and Only
That has saved me
From eminent danger
Odd enough
We use to be
Strangers
But now we know each other better
Then all the
Fakers
Its like I'm stuck
In a fable
Because this friendship
Is a priceless gift
And without you
I would be
Unstable
Even though
Some don't understand
And it brings me
Anger
Just remember
You are my
One and Only
Fallen
Angel
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-02-14 18:09:25]
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Re: My Fallen Angel
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by fielding88 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 07:02:03 PM AEST
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| the second poem ive read today about angels. i like how you described a tight bond with an angel, and how special that is to you. nice write here. |
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Re: My Fallen Angel
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by heartbroken4ever on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:42:18 PM AEST
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It's beautiful it brung tears
to my eyes.
Thank you
Love always
amber |
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Re: My Fallen Angel
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:34:21 PM AEST
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| this seems familiar to some of the music i listen to. i liked this one. you almost stole my title for one of my poems posted a long time ago, back in the day. except it was thy fallen angel, and it was inspired by a rolling stone magazine. other people have written about that one too. =] |
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Re: My Fallen Angel
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by sojourner on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:18:52 AM AEST
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nice little poem,isn't it nice to have someone pick you up when you have fallen.
sojourner, |
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Re: My Fallen Angel
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by xXcrossedXx on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:36:48 PM AEST
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Beautiful once again, you're a great writer clark.
--amanda-- |
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