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Do YOU remember....!?
Contributed by
Sonibe
on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Tell me....
Do you remember
when you told me about
that strange dream you had,
involving you in a town,
people everywhere running for their lives,
and one person you couldn't see very well....
Do you remember
he was dressed in a black cloak,
blood red colored eyes,
a sword in his hand,
and him watching the people and laughing
like a madman....
Do you remember
screaming uncontrolably,
running with the other people,
running from....him....
and 2 others like him on horseback....
Do you remember
seeing those people being held in the air,
being decapitated and their heads
still bleeding being put in a bag,
seeing their bodies rotting with maggots
crawling all over them....
Do you remember
seeing all of those people before....at school,
and that person with the sword
walking up to you and saying something
in Japanese, and then English....
Do you remember what he said?
...."Watashi wa MidKnight Makoto desu"....
...."My name is MidKnight Makoto"....
Do you remember
going to school the next day,
and the teachers telling the class of a
new student?
Do you remember what he looked like?
....yes, he looked just like the person in your
dream....
Do you remember what he said to you?
...."My name is Sonibe".....
then he whispered in your ear....
...."Watashi wa MidKnight Makoto desu"....
Do you remember what he was carrying?
....he was carrying a bag
....full of people's heads
Do you remember what happened next?
he opened the bag....
and you looked up at your body....
....from the bag, and your body dropped....
....
Copyright ©
Sonibe
... [
2002-12-12 08:00:00]
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Re: Do YOU remember....!?
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by Icequeen on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 08:05:39 AM AEST
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| Woa, interesting if rather bloody stuff. Nice ending. |
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Re: Do YOU remember....!?
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by DreamsOfDark on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 07:32:03 PM AEST
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| That is really awsome. The way you weave the details and the memories together make it feel like you were realy there and ha that happening to you. I love your writing, keep it up. |
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Re: Do YOU remember....!?
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by Solmyr1404 on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 03:56:07 PM AEST
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you know you my boy, dawg, but that is TWISTED!!!! im going to have nightmares now! Thanks
Solmyr Malikando Amerikayou
SMA AKA Bryan |
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