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Death's Cousin
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:06:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
limericks
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She said, sleep is like dying each day
And Death will make sleep go away
But sooner or later
One or the other will claim her
And Sleep holds its cousin at bay
Thanks Stitch ... noted and changed
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Nazmythian
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2005-02-14 15:06:34]
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Re: Death's Cousin
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:09:50 PM AEST
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wow wise words Nazzy.
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Re: Death's Cousin
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:20:21 PM AEST
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| ahhhh yes....to sleep perchance to die..lol nice limerick.. and I always thought limericks were supposed to be funny..guess not.. |
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Re: Death's Cousin
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:35:57 PM AEST
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Perfect. That's all that is coming to me... More when the words are suitable to submit. All my love, cherie. Forever,
Votre fleur. *Stephy*
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Re: Death's Cousin
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by Stitch on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 04:53:16 PM AEST
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Very interesting. Drop the apostrophe in the final it's. You mean its, not it is.
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Re: Death's Cousin
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 06:06:06 AM AEST
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Short but you got the message across very nicely. Cleverly done and writen like a true pro that you are
Jane xx |
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Re: Death's Cousin
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 07:02:05 AM AEST
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that was different, no matter what style you use you always shine :)
pix xx |
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Re: Death's Cousin
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:42:21 PM AEST
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Naz, Again so unique so profound. Always pushing the creative envolope.
Super job
Sorry I didn't realize I had gotten so far behind on reading your poems.
I'm sure glad I did catch up!
Willofree
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Re: Death's Cousin
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by Rylo on
Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 03:55:08 PM AEST
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| Very wise choice of words, excellent writing. I enjoyed this piece a lot. |
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