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Shadow
Contributed by
kyarn
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:55:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The sun sets slowly below the horizon
In the fading light I call your name
Come to me my shadow-lover
Together we shall darkness tame
I look for you amid the twilight
On the night bound path do you await
With eternal patience for my arrival
My heart, my love, my shadow-mate.
Copyright ©
kyarn
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2005-02-14 14:55:58]
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Re: Shadow
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:57:20 PM AEST
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Ohh I loved that , well done
pix xx |
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Re: Shadow
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by sammydid on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:31:24 PM AEST
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| oh! so wonderful! good write! ^^ |
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Re: Shadow
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by wolfman on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 04:04:25 PM AEST
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this was a good one I liked how you told you feelings here I felt your emotion from how few word you used, very good,
I also liked your note at the beginning, made me laugh.
be strong and God bless.
wolfman |
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Re: Shadow
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:13:15 PM AEST
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| This is really very good! Nice work!1 |
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Re: Shadow
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:13:23 PM AEST
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| This is really very good! Nice work!! |
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Re: Shadow
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:56:50 PM AEST
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| This was a beautiful write my friend. Much peace. |
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Re: Shadow
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:47:23 AM AEST
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Nice! ... "amid the twilight"... geez - that just seems the perfect setting. I read this as both longing and hopeful... and find beauty in that.
Lovely, kyarn!
From the one in disguise *wink*
(your PM made me smile)
~SNM~ |
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