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Hell
Contributed by
Poet_of_Anger
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:02:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Walking through the gates of hell
Looking at all those that before me fell
When once I thought I had seen the light
My closest friend murdered me in the night
And I was so far from the truth
But in the night there was nothing I could do
So I look at the gate
Ponder my fate
And turn myself around
Climb out of the ground
Scream out to the heavens
Just give me a chance
I will prove that I'm worth it
I will make sure that this lasts
If I can only have but an hour
I can make it up to you
I will give food to the hungry
Do what you wanted me to
Be merciful I beg you
I wish to change
For my life is not worth life
It has fallen down the drain
And I am dying yet again
A feeling I have felt many times before
But I am friendless in the darkness
As my soul departs again from this world
I arrive back at the gates
And I warily glance inside
And I know that I can not escape
All of the hate that still survived
Although I tried to change my ways
It didn't matter in the end my life I gave
And I have fallen back into my grave
Imbedded in my world of hate
So this life I leave behind
With no mourners at my grave to cry
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Re: Hell
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:16:32 PM AEST
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good, dark write,sad and emotional
pix xx |
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Re: Hell
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:50:37 PM AEST
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| yes the hate survives when you stab a friend in the back..it even survives the grave..It isn't the hate so much as the hurt..that's what really makes it bad..the other perspective.. |
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Re: Hell
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by bethie on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:51:29 PM AEST
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The last line really speaks to the aloneness of our existence. I can appreciate that. Dark and brooding. I hope you can lighten up a little in life.
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