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the mystical creature
Contributed by
kitty_girl
on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:23:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The mystical creature.
It flows through my body,
its the beat of my heart,
it controls my brain cells
it takes over me completley.
its the flue, its the cold
its the wind ,its the rain
its the sun, its the air,
its the whole universe!!!
the creature is black with claws of raisers
with canine jaws
teeth like blades
the speed of a cheetar
the eyes of a tigger.
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kitty_girl
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2005-02-14 13:23:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: the mystical creature
(User Rating: 1 ) by dtborchert on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:33:13 PM AEST (User
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Great job. Keep writing. I enjoyed this.
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