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Where have all the words gone?
Contributed by
Mangs
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:07:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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In the flickering candlelight,
The lines on your face distinctly shown.
Theres you, me and an eerie silence…
Where have all the words gone?
Like the north winds melted by the summer sun,
Lost in the skies never to return.
Like the water that ebb’d and flowd’
Water that slips through the palm…you weren’t mine to hold.
Like the jealous moon and stars,
Never to be found as another day starts.
Like the dream that comes and goes…
That angelic vision, from a memory flows.
I see your lips as they begin to part,
with the quickest of subtlety, you cloak your heart
The softest of whispers, and then a lull before the storm
And in the quietness I wonder…Where have all the words gone?
Copyright ©
Mangs
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2005-02-14 13:07:22]
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Re: Where have all the words gone?
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:10:10 PM AEST
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wow that was written so well, the words jsat flowed with ease. deep and meaningful
pix xx |
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Re: Where have all the words gone?
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by dtborchert on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:34:10 PM AEST
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| This really is a beautiful poem. |
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Re: Where have all the words gone?
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by little_genna on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:59:30 PM AEST
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How beautiful.
Hun you really made me feel this.....
so much meaning this is powerful and i totally love it!!!!!
Happy Valentines day |
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Re: Where have all the words gone?
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by fielding88 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:43:37 PM AEST
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| this is a lot like the things that i tend to write. where have all the words gone? that was such a great choice of words, this was a nice piece of work i liked it. |
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Re: Where have all the words gone?
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 12:33:58 PM AEST
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beautiful and meaningful, great write.
--amanda-- |
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Re: Where have all the words gone?
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:01:26 PM AEST
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great images, beautifully written:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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