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Valentines Day
Contributed by
dalamar
on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:05:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As the blood pours from the gash in my heart
I wonder why you left me as I slowly die
Did you really have to tear me apart
So this is really good-bye
Fine then! I will just stay here
Until all my blood has left me
Death… Ha ha I have no fear
And I will not plea for thee
And I yell at you
“I don’t need you anymore.
I have what I want.
I hate you”
Then as the darkness falls on me
I say with my last breath
“But no matter how much I hate you
I will
…always….
... Love……
… You.”
Copyright ©
dalamar
... [
2005-02-14 13:05:15]
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Re: Valentines Day
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:05:47 PM AEST
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that was so emotional *hugs*
pix xx |
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Re: Valentines Day
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by dtborchert on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:35:03 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed the poem... It was really well written. |
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Re: Valentines Day
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by JasTrask_22 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:36:40 PM AEST
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I LOVED It
i wish i could write awesome poetry like all yous can!!
im just amatuer i guess haha
Happy Valentine's Day!!
this day means alot to my mom too, i love her, and she doesn't deserve to suffer, and i think im gonan write apoem about that!! dont worry, shes not dead, nor is my dad... but anyways
AWESOME WRITE!
i lvoe it
emotional too hunni
cya!
!JAZZ! |
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Re: Valentines Day
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by bethie on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:44:16 PM AEST
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| hmmm-- Do I detect a mixed message here? A for effort, I suppose. |
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