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Angel With A Dirty Face
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:52:05 PM in AEST
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I am an angel with a dirty face,
Wherever I am I feel out of place,
Feel like I’m not meant to belong,
Over & over I hear the same old song.
The one where I’m told I am not loved,
The one where lyrically I’m pushed & shoved,
My dress now grey once pure white,
I feel permanently stained from my fight.
My halo slipped right around my neck,
From too many years of what the heck,
I can never wash this dirt away,
On my skin the marks will stay.
Underneath my mask of make-up,
You will find I am one sick pup,
My heart was pure once upon a time,
Now it’s filled with hurt, hate & grime.
My wings wilted & eventually died,
I just sat there & I cried,
There was nothing at all I could do,
I am a tear stained angel with a heart so blue.
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Re: Angel With A Dirty Face
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by Flipped_out on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:07:25 PM AEST
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Pixie, this is wonderful, really emotional and loved your choice of words
Hugs xxxxxxxxxx
Kelly xx |
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Re: Angel With A Dirty Face
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by wolfman on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:09:42 PM AEST
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truly sad, but you are still an angel no matter how ditry you are and if they cant see that its their falt for not looking. have your emotions wasted and you heart taken for granted are the hardest things to deal with, not knowing where you belong or how to fit in will spiritual destroy you, if now were eles then knowe that you will always have us here for you.
this was a very sencer poem I felt sad from the emotional imigery it portrayed, but just know that your stans will be washed away by the one who will cry with you through your strugles. be strong and God bless.
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Re: Angel With A Dirty Face
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by Mangs on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:10:52 PM AEST
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very emotional....
My wings wilted & eventually died,
I just sat there & I cried,
There was nothing at all I could do,
I am a tear stained angel with a heart so blue.
Just loved this...
Umang |
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Re: Angel With A Dirty Face
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:34:44 PM AEST
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Awww hun...
All angels shine bright to some people in their lives...no matter how dirty you feel, people can always see past it.
Such an emotional write...
*hugs* Phil xx |
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Re: Angel With A Dirty Face
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by dtborchert on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:35:36 PM AEST
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| Wow this is a really good poem. The way you put things together and stuff. Good poem keep writing |
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Re: Angel With A Dirty Face
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by zaknafein8891 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:41:25 PM AEST
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| great poem, I really like this one. |
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Re: Angel With A Dirty Face
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:28:10 PM AEST
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| this write rocks pixie girl. |
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Re: Angel With A Dirty Face
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by bethie on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:31:38 PM AEST
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Too many years of what the heck
That's good.
Thank you for your comments on my feeble attempts at poetry.
Truly,
Bethie |
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Re: Angel With A Dirty Face
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by fielding88 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:48:18 PM AEST
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| beautiful write here. so heavenly...i especially like the way you closed things off. that last part was really sumthing. |
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Re: Angel With A Dirty Face
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 06:09:29 AM AEST
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Kriss you will always be our Angel no matter how dirty your face get.
This was such an incredible sad write, great word usage as always.
Jane xxx |
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Re: Angel With A Dirty Face
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by Stellar on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 09:49:25 PM AEST
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Great write!
Now I remember why I started reading your poetry in the first place.
~Stellar |
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