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A womans Colours (Black and Blue)
Contributed by
flipped_out
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:32:57 PM in AEST
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A Woman’s Colours
Black and blue
My colours living in fear
Is fear of living?
My skin purple and green..
I taste red, metallic copper tang..
On my tongue on my mind on my skin
Am I Black?
From the inside out
Hollow
Do you even doubt?
My shallow grave
My haven
white
Safest place
From you
Porcelain pink to olive pulp
Yellow to blue
Eyes crimson
Blood stings
Blinding me for days
Do you know my colours now?
Black and Blue
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Re: A womans Colours (Black and Blue)
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:34:12 PM AEST
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awww Kell that was deep and a harsh and scary reality for some women out there, written well, good to have you back with us hun *hugs*
pix xx |
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Re: A womans Colours (Black and Blue)
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:18:48 PM AEST
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Geez - wow. All I can think when I read this is... I know if I heard you read this aloud - I'd be completely blown away. Though... your voice comes so clearly with this - I can hear you already.
Potent.
(btw -- I have a "As pink converts to mossy green" line in one of my writes.... your porcelain pink line totals me, perhaps because of it *sigh*)
~SNM~ |
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Re: A womans Colours (Black and Blue)
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by dtborchert on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:36:54 PM AEST
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| It pains me to think that this could be true. But it was written quite well nonetheless. |
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Re: A womans Colours (Black and Blue)
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:30:51 PM AEST
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very deep and emotional
well done.take care
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Re: A womans Colours (Black and Blue)
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:10:31 PM AEST
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| I feel bruised on the inside out too.. fighting with my last ounce of breath..and still the hounds lick at my blood..nice to see your write..enjoyed it.. |
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Re: A womans Colours (Black and Blue)
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 05:38:16 AM AEST
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Kell this was really emotive and sad, well writen and i agree you wrote this so perfectly. Great write.
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: A womans Colours (Black and Blue)
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 09:45:01 PM AEST
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This is so sad. It sucks that it really happens too. I hope it didn't happen to you.
Scott |
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Re: A womans Colours (Black and Blue)
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 06:29:16 PM AEST
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| Wow, deep. Good job! |
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Re: A womans Colours (Black and Blue)
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by Twysted_Fate on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 02:52:08 AM AEST
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| That was deep Kell... wouldnt' wish it on my worst enemy... talk to you soon, and well, that was very well done, but I wouldn't expect any less from you |
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Re: A womans Colours (Black and Blue)
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 06:11:21 PM AEST
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| Kelly this was an awesome write. I was wondering what happened to you. I miss all the funny times with you and Johnny. This was written over a year ago....where have I been? DUH. Peace to you, Laura |
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