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Why Bother
Contributed by
xoxpaperxheartxox
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:23:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Dont know whats wrong with me
Wish you people would finally see
That on the inside im dieing
Dont know why i even bother trying
I love her so much she doesnt even know
But with my fear of commitment its so hard to show
Whatever it doesnt mean anything
Of course it does what am i saying
Torn between now and past
My future is leaving me fast
Maybe i should just let go
I dont think anyone would know
Love killed me that what the note would say
Because of my love for you ill never be ok
Love killed me thats what the note will say...
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2005-02-14 10:23:40]
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Re: Why Bother
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by dtborchert on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:43:15 PM AEST
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| Your future hasn't left, she just had yet to find you. Don't give up. Nice write. |
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Re: Why Bother
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:29:39 PM AEST
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this a great write i loved the part torn btween now and past.. My future is leaving me fast...
That is anamzing write you keep up the great work and never let anyone put you down.. Never let anyone kill you because they left you.. People come and go and if it wasn't meant to be it's just isn't meant to be.. If it is it will come back.. It just takes time and patients let it be and things will come clear..
UnKnOwN BUtTerFlY |
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Re: Why Bother
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 05:05:45 PM AEST
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I like how you repeated that line twice..
Love killed me that what the note would say
that's cool.. look forward to many, many more..
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Re: Why Bother
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 12:30:00 PM AEST
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This was an amazing write. My favorite out of all your poems. I think you did a fantastic job here, sorry for your loss. Great write, please keep it up.
xoxo
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