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Valentine For Life
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:49:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You’re not just for Valentines Day,
I know you’ll be with me all the way,
Our love has survived all the bumps,
It hasn’t been easy ironing out the lumps.
All the hearts & candy in the world,
Couldn’t explain as to how I’ll unfurl,
My love for you runs deeper than any lake,
I know the bond between us won’t break.
My heart shares its beat with yours,
Love & devotion escapes from our pours,
As I touch your skin I feel myself shudder,
Again never do I want to feel any other.
You are mine & that means a lot,
A love like ours isn’t one to be forgot,
It will bloom & continue to grow,
You’re always in my thoughts I want you to know.
Some never share all that we do,
I am so grateful for my wonderful you,
So Happy Valentines Day my love,
Into my life you have released your white dove.
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pixie
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Re: Valentine For Life
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:19:46 AM AEST
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Aww this is so sweet and beautiful, great poem Kriss you make me wish im inlove again.
Jane xx |
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Re: Valentine For Life
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:48:12 AM AEST
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Very beautiful poem pix, about a life long commitment . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Valentine For Life
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by purplestary on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:16:20 AM AEST
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awwwwww...that is so beautiful!!!! my fave line: "Into my life you have released your white dove"
i love this poem!!!! |
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Re: Valentine For Life
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by TheRaven on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:46:36 AM AEST
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yes, very beautiful write. i agree, that is my favorite line as well. i would've seperated the rhyme scheme into a,b,a,b, but still very good.
the raven |
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Re: Valentine For Life
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by O7NeVeS on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:34:30 PM AEST
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| This was a beautiful, sweet write! Ur right when u say "some never share all that we do" I know i've never had wat u have! TD |
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Re: Valentine For Life
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by Stitch on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:43:52 PM AEST
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Sticking it out and being there for each other is what it's about. BRAVO for saying it so well.
Stitch |
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Re: Valentine For Life
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by dtborchert on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:46:24 PM AEST
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| Aww sooo sweet and heartwarming.very lovely poem and so well written :) |
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Re: Valentine For Life
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:49:12 PM AEST
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Hey Pixie ... ? The next time you feel a little worried about you and Mark ... getcher butt back here and read this ... I'm bettin he feels the same way and a few words of heated rowing ain't gonna change this one fact ... "A love like ours isn’t one to be forgot,
It will bloom & continue to grow..."
Well written Pix
Nazzy ~
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