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I Can Still Feel You
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:47:44 AM in AEST
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I Can Still Feel You
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After all these years
After all this time
You still leave me
With a positive sign
Be it on the back of my neck
Or flicker of my eye
I still feel your presence
Too strongly to deny
My ears hear your voice
My mind pictures your face
Your smell still lingers
In the smallest of place
You might have been taken in body
But your spirit lives on
I still feel it daily
Long after you’ve been gone
I find it a comfort
That helps me deal with your loss
To still feel you beside me
Helps we deal with the cost
Right now my heart is beating
Cause I feel you right now
I know that you’re there
Guiding me somehow
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2005-02-14 08:47:44]
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Re: I Can Still Feel You
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by Stitch on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:10:04 AM AEST
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Beautiful and heartbreaking and moving. So moving. Nice stuff.
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Re: I Can Still Feel You
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:40:28 AM AEST
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This caught at my heartstrings. A wonderful job you've done with this poem.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
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Re: I Can Still Feel You
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by TheRaven on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:57:20 AM AEST
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i agree, very moving, especially for those who have lost someone. touching, i loved it
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Re: I Can Still Feel You
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:25:53 PM AEST
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This is wonderful, Jeff. Emotional and well crafted --- which is not an easy thing to achieve. I agree with the others... it's quite moving.
Well done,
~SNM~ |
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Re: I Can Still Feel You
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by kitty_girl on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:46:05 PM AEST
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is it true????///////
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Re: I Can Still Feel You
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by dtborchert on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:47:20 PM AEST
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All I can say is wow. Pure simplicity with such power. Great work.
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Re: I Can Still Feel You
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 11:51:58 PM AEST
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Deeply touching and so positive, Jeff... Made me think of my old Principal..and my Dad..
Thanks for sharing this...
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