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Memories
Contributed by
dawny
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:46:46 AM in AEST
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Sadness is all around me
Everywhere I go
All I see are memories
Scenes from long ago
Memories are gone for her
But linger on for me
Her life was filled with endless pain
But now her spirit's free
The hardest thing is letting go
The memories still seem real
But deep inside I know she’s gone
And emptiness I feel
She had her hopes and dreams destroyed
In a single brutal blow
I only hope she rests in peace
But sadness still I know
For Debbie, who I will miss always.
Rest in peace my friend
Love Dawn
xxx
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Re: Memories
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by fuzzywuzzy on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:52:46 AM AEST
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| So sad to lose someone you love..I'm so sorry..the rhyme and meter were lovely..I know that's no consolation..:-( |
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Re: Memories
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:54:11 AM AEST
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| I'm deeply sorry for your loss. This is a very fitting tribute you have created for her. I bet she's looking down on you and smiling. My prayers are with you. |
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Re: Memories
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by Rhymingron on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 06:58:03 AM AEST
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| I could feel this one. A beautiful tribute. |
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Re: Memories
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by Stitch on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 07:27:07 AM AEST
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Yes, quite a tribute. I can't imagine your pain.
One grammar thing in the last line of the second stanza, you want to use an apostrophe on spirit's to make it
"spirit is free."
Nice stuff. Deeply felt.
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Re: Memories
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:05:56 AM AEST
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Dawny this was so sad, im so sorry for your loss. I hope you find peace you deserve soon.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Memories
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by pixie on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:28:55 AM AEST
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aww Dawny that was so sad and tragic, I am really sorry for the loss of your friend. expressed so deeply,
pix xx |
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Re: Memories
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by AliB on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 04:27:05 PM AEST
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Hi Dawny,
This is an extrememly sad and tragic poem. I know you're still hurting but I'm sure she's looking down on you and thanking you for looking after her daughter, and proud to see you marrying marky in August. I'm here if you need to chat mate,
Love Ali xxxx |
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Re: Memories
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by venkat on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:33:44 AM AEST
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i am very sorry Dawn.I know the feeling of emptiness when such loss happens. the memories won't leave..though you know she rests in peace. God Bless :-) venkat
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Re: Memories
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 07:50:53 AM AEST
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My heartfelt condolescences in regards to your friend.
You writing this shows what a wonderful friend you are.
Kie |
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Re: Memories
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by took3nails on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:13:01 AM AEST
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| A very beautiful write, You wrote the way it should be written, Needs to be published because you speak for all of our hearts. |
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Re: Memories
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 01:44:08 PM AEST
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Oh gosh, this is heartbreaking.
Such a sad write, I'm sure your friend would love it.
I am so so sorry for your loss, hun.
A gorgeous but sad write once again,
*hugs* Phil xxx
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Re: Memories
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by Kie on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 06:44:48 AM AEST
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It is only me leaving a second comment. You are right you know. The hardest part is letting go. If I could only figure out how to do that.
I seem to cry every time I read your poetry!
Who now must really hurry to get to work!
K- |
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