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Star Light, Star Bright

Contributed by PsychoticDreamz on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:43:46 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



What ever happened to 'happy as can be'
We'd be together forever and always be free
but luck played out different and everything changed
all smiles faded cept those frozen in frames
the warmth in my heart grew to be icy and cold
All I think of is words I should have told
Fate can't be chosen, just altered for time
If only I'd seen ahead, seconds could've been mine
Yet now you're gone I still feel like you're with me
with every blink of my eyes, it's you I still see

Star light, star bright, first star I see tonight,
I wish I may, I wish I might..Have my wish and cry tonight
Star light, star bright, first star I see tonight,
I wish I may, I wish I might..Have my wish and die tonight

You've made me hate feelings that I thought were there
But you leaving my side makes me more aware
I'm sorry for all the wrongs things I've done
you didn't have to leave me here, the only one
Now my eyes are never dry and always sore
You've emptied my soul down to the core
Yet I'll always love you, no matter how much more I'll hurt
It's you my heart burns for, but I guess I got burnt
If only you were here now, I'd try to change it all around
to have your love back where it'd first been found

Star light, star bright, first star I see tonight,
I wish I may, I wish I might..Have my wish and cry tonight
Star light, star bright, first star I see tonight,
I wish I may, I wish I might..Have my wish and die tonight

I cant comprehend what you've done to me this day
This wasn't ever in the plans we used to say
If I seen you today I'd fall short of breath
Because ever since you left me I've contemplated death
I just need one explaination, to understand why
until I get an answer all I can do is wait around and cry
I always picture old memories, of laughter and tears
If only you'd stay we could both think of all the years
Yet now you're gone I still feel like you're with me
with every blink of my eyes, it's you I still see

Star light, star bright, first star I see tonight,
I wish I may, I wish I might..Have my wish and die tonight
Star light, star bright, first star I see tonight,
I wish I may, I wish I might.. Meet you again in death tonight




Copyright © PsychoticDreamz ... [ 2005-02-14 01:43:46]
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Re: Star Light, Star Bright (User Rating: 1 )
by In2thetwilightzone on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 04:09:35 AM AEST
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awwwwwwwwww wow that was magical, i felt that, i felt that so much, you are a wonderful writer, i think we share a similar style, because i could predict the rhymes, but thats not a bad thing, it just means you can take a mental rythm and turn it into reality and change it to suit your emotion, only the best of writers can do that, well done i really felt this piece, classic. you watch, once more people have read this poem, you will soon have like 8 comments, its very deep and surreal, i can bearly handle this its so strong. welldone, classic :') xxxxxjazzxxxxxxxx


Re: Star Light, Star Bright (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 04:29:22 AM AEST
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beautiful... heartfelt


Re: Star Light, Star Bright (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 06:17:15 PM AEST
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Wow this was filled with so much pain I don't
know what to say. It hurt to read this because
it hurts to see others going through so much
turmoil. I think I liked the first stanza the best,
but it was all equally great and heartfelt. Keep
up the writing.

Bobo (Joel)




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