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The Transfix of What I Cannot Survive
Contributed by
weepingprophet
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Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:38:26 AM in AEST
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did you know
you could hold the magnetic force of my world
you could make the arrow of anguish decrease
make it worthless
if you told me everyday that i'm beautiful to you
but you only beg me to eat
your words are forming only another tool
of regret
i am a product frail and used
standing on the quivering arrow of choice
and i choose whatever gets me love
if that is less, i will be less
but you don't abolish doubt
you don't hold me close
no i am 88 pounds of emptiness
when will you pull the arrow from the scale
break the tranfix i have on what i cannot survive
tell me everyday that i'm beautiful
you are the only emblem of beauty in my world
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Re: The Transfix of What I Cannot Survive
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 05:06:03 AM AEST
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| even when someone tells me that I'm pretty..I don't believe it.. I like this write |
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Re: The Transfix of What I Cannot Survive
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 01:38:36 AM AEST
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Very sad but well said. U need to get thelp to gain weight. My youngest daughter was 80 something pounds not long ago but she finnaly got a great Dr. that helped her and now she weighs 100lbs. and is very happy with her new husband. No man is worth u loosing your life over if he is abusing u in any way.
U must live for yourself.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Transfix of What I Cannot Survive
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 12:07:37 PM AEST
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quivering arrow of choice
I love that line
good flow too.... |
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