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shadows of love
Contributed by
sojourner
on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:11:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
Patriotic
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If love is not enough
I'll bid you adieu
For tis all that I have
this love that is true
Why beckon me stay
lie down by your side
Yet, seek out the shadows
that we might hide
The darkness conceals
the sins of our hearts
touh me not ,as I depart
If love is not enough
I'll bid you adieu
For tis all that I have
this love that is true
Smitten was I
by this creature of the night
draining my love,fearing the light
Drawn an I,unto this veil of sleep
she grows stronger
yet, why does she weep
Copyright ©
sojourner
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2005-02-14 00:11:14]
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Re: shadows of love
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by Jenn2004 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:14:49 AM AEST
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| Nice poem, i really liked it. |
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Re: shadows of love
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by fuzzywuzzy on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:17:47 AM AEST
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reminds me of ..He wishes for the Cloths of Heaven..
lovely.. |
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Re: shadows of love
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by foxwillow on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 07:39:35 AM AEST
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oh this really touched me, so beautiful, giving everything of oneself, the pain is deep
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Re: shadows of love
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by Mangs on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:52:15 AM AEST
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| Lovely write...short and precise...with wonderful expresion. |
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Re: shadows of love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:46:37 AM AEST
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| This is so powerful and moving. I really enjoyed reading this. |
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