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I wish
Contributed by
Quilted_rag_doll
on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:41:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I wish you could see,
Inside of me.
That you could look into my depths,
And feel the pain within.
..Buried like a knife..
Like a blade being ripped,
Through my very soul.
..Excruciatingly..slow..
Every ounce of hurt,
Felt within my being.
..To the very core..
My thick red blood,
Drips down, upon my innocence.
..Bit.By.Bit..
Tainting its pureness,
With my wicked sins.
..Staining it, ruining it..
I wish you could be,
Apart of me.
To know my sorrow,
And cry my tears.
..One.By.One..
They fall off my cheeks,
Splashing softly onto my skin.
..Drip..Drop..
The salt stinging the fresh cuts,
Mixing with the blood.
..Thump..Thump..
My pulse beats through my veins,
As my heartstrings play, to keep me alive.
I wish that I,
Was not me.
I wish that I,
Could no longer be.
I wish that I,
Could make you see.
That all I really wish is:
[..To Die..]
Copyright ©
Quilted_rag_doll
... [
2005-02-13 22:41:43]
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Re: I wish
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by sojourner on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 11:38:24 PM AEST
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wow,thats a heavy poem,much emotion.I hope it is just a poem and not how you feel within.
sojourner, |
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Re: I wish
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by Jenn2004 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:56:23 AM AEST
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| This really is a deep poem, but its good to let your feelings out good job. |
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Re: I wish
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 10:12:23 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem. I love the style of it. The words fit together so well. Great poem! Keep 'em comming! |
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