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Broken
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:53:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It ended before it even started
Pulled along
Lead to believed she loved me
She only lied hurt me
Yea she miles away
Love don't stop that
She is weak
Her love is weak, fake
She found someone else and couldn't even tell me
Now I'm broken
Is that love??
She gave up on me cause I'm miles away
I'm giving up on her because she is fake
Rodney I loved you and you just drove me to hate
Everything I wanted and tried for was for you
Now its over and so are you
I'm all broken up
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Re: Broken
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by DesolantDreamer on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:15:52 PM AEST
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I understand this feeling very well. I know the pain and anger at being led on and crushed. It is a hard thing to go through, I know. You express it so well in this amazing poem. Every line speaks of an emotion: pain, hate, betrayl, anger. I love it and thanks for sharing it with us. Keep up the good writing!
-You say you read me like an open book. Though the pages are torn and frayed
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Re: Broken
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by bigtig6269 on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:41:32 PM AEST
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| very good write man. I know the feeling all to well with a girl that stayed 45 miles away. she stayed right up the road in the summer and we were kool, but the minute she'd go back, I was forgotton about. Keep up the good work |
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Re: Broken
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:42:29 PM AEST
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| love can make people do strange things,u werent led on,the day that the chance was given was token and u were told,miles part can do damage on love,but the feelings that were given each time we talked was warm.u have the ability to let people talk to u,which drew us closer,but the miles drew us further apart,the endless conversations we had,u say i gave u hope,how is that being fake?never did i lie,i told u everything,theres alot of things u know that not to many others know,i gave u everything and u never noticed,how is that being fake? |
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