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Losing Blood
Contributed by
essentially9
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Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:44:31 PM in AEST
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Losing Blood
Blood will fail you
Water can't sustain
And get you through
All of your pain
Satisfaction is hard to come by
But hunger is easily gratified
Blood will fail
With veins so frail
Blood will fail
Colored by the pale
Skin shallow deep in sin
With lost innocence
Blood will fail you
As the razor cuts through
What sustains you
Until you lose
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-02-13 21:44:31]
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Re: Losing Blood
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:56:21 PM AEST
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A sharp (no pun intended) clarity here.
I like it.
Stitch
The following questions are from my 12-year-old daughter who was reading over my shoulder:
What are you saying ?
Cutting good or cutting bad? |
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Re: Losing Blood
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by killingmehslowly on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:36:08 AM AEST
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| Excellent poem. I love the lines "Skin shallow deep in sin, With lost innocence" It just grabbed my attention. Wonderful job... |
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Re: Losing Blood
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 02:24:08 AM AEST
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Must have missed this one...great poem Jen...short and sweet
Clark |
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Re: Losing Blood
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 11:26:18 PM AEST
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"Satisfaction is hard to come by
But hunger is easily gratified"
Totally true. |
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