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i knew
Contributed by
visualizing_life
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Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:24:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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i knew i liked you
i knew we were alike
in so many ways
i knew we were sumthin special
we talked constently
mostly we talked about the future
making me think we would last
one thing i knew for sure...
i would do anything for you
i was truely happy
that you cared
but wen you kissed me
i knew i as in love
happily ever after, rite?
WRONG
after all we went through
why would you hurt me as bad as you did
i gave you my heart
and you broke it into pieces
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Re: i knew
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by DesolantDreamer on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:30:32 PM AEST
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| I can really relate. I understand those feelings of having your heart smashed, I really do. I always wonder those questions. But don't give up, someone will come and tape those peices back together. I know it. |
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Re: i knew
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by Kachina on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:44:16 PM AEST
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| This is a really nice piece. Though, make sure your preview your poem before you submit it. I understand though, I've goofed up some words to. Anyways...keep up the good work. |
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Re: i knew
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by Sir_Odd87 on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 05:39:10 AM AEST
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| wow... cretin, eh? |
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