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Fiction
Contributed by
saveMEfromMYSELF
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Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 08:52:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The words that ripped her heart out,
'20 years,' forgotten.
The child is alone.
Her world’s become rotten.
Life, love, and happiness,
Gone in a blink.
Alone in a world that forgot her.
No one would think
That a child so pure,
So innocent would deliver
Ill tidings to the boy
That hated to be near her.
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Re: Fiction
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by In2thetwilightzone on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 04:17:02 AM AEST
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| dont get it :( lol :S |
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Re: Fiction
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by speed-of-sound on
Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 10:52:10 PM AEST
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| i like it. very sad though. are you planning to publish the story on here? i'd love to read it if you do. :) |
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