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You Make Me
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 07:29:51 PM in AEST
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You make my eyes look like they feel
More beautiful than make-up can buy
The lids are fair, the lashes long
They’re bluer than the sky
You make my body feel like beauty’s real
Like female's epitome
My posture poised, my delicate curves
More striking than movie screen
You make me feel as though I can
Like I’ll be who I want to be
And only in your loving wake
Can “Someday” truly be
You make me all I want to be
Like Midas making gold
I’m glad we’ve got eternity
For you to cast me in my mold
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Re: You Make Me
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by freckle on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:12:14 PM AEST
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| This is a very nice poem. I like the ending especially. Good write. |
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Re: You Make Me
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by bethie on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:55:48 PM AEST
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| I wish I had written this. All day I've been trying to put into words how I felt after a night of great lovemaking. This poem says that. I appreciate it. |
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Re: You Make Me
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by sammydid on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 05:21:19 PM AEST
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| what are you talking about? the endings wonderful! i really enjoyed reading this. |
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Re: You Make Me
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by noone on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:11:54 PM AEST
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This is a great write! I love the whole thing it just flows...also great description! The ending is perfect...don't change it. Keep posting more,
Kirsty x |
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Re: You Make Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 09:49:49 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write. That's what love's about: feeling understood and special every second you're with that person. |
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Re: You Make Me
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by SPOKENWORDARTIST on
Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 05:14:44 PM AEST
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| WAY COOL POEM LIKE VERY MUCH |
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Re: You Make Me
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 12:43:56 AM AEST
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What kind of comment can I possible make of such romance...love...ahhh!
~Carrie~ |
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