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Wastes away
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 06:19:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Pushing
Pulling
....................
Etching
Sketching
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Sifting
Drifting
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My pain away
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Trying
Lieing
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Sending
Mending
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Defending
Rendering
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My pain today
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Hurting
Flirting
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Cutting
Running
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Scratching
Clawing
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My life away
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Crying
Dieing
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Falling
Crawling
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Begining
Ending
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My life today
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Ending all my pain
My life
Wastes Away
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Like the ground
Absorbs the rain
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This blade absorbs
My Pain
..
Taking my life
.
Today
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-02-13 18:19:43]
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Re: Wastes away
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by Stonedraider23 on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 06:35:04 PM AEST
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| Good write moved and went fast try harder its tough but all im writing now is like this |
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Re: Wastes away
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by LaDyD on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 11:26:21 PM AEST
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| Great write..very strong |
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Re: Wastes away
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by noone on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 04:00:19 PM AEST
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Brilliant! This is a great write. Emotions flow, truely talented. Keep it up, you are good at writing this type of poetry.
Kirsty xx |
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Re: Wastes away
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:37:22 PM AEST
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| a good post. i dont know how many posts i have. 277 or 278. maybe more. ::now wanting to get to the bottom of the mystery!:: and you know what clark. today will last forever. |
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Re: Wastes away
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by xXcrossedXx on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:38:44 PM AEST
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I love this, one of my favorite poems of yours. This was terrific, great job clark.
--amanda-- |
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