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I'm Sorry
Contributed by
mbs
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Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 04:40:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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What's to say -
That there's gonna be another day.
That for a fact, you can guarantee -
That today, is not the last.
No longer any time left,
To make up for the past....
If that were the case,
Maybe today I'd say -
I'm sorry!
As I look and recall -
All of the times I was to proud,
Never being able to say I was wrong outloud.
If I had just today,
And I knew that tomorrow wouldn't come -
I'd cry for all, I'd left behind -
Left undone...
Broken wings -
Have left me flightless.
Selective vision -
Has rendered me sightless...
And I'm afraid, of my life coming to an end,
Without making these humble apologies-
I'm down on bended knee, saying I'm so sorry.
Forgive me, please
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mbs
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2005-02-13 16:40:03]
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 05:27:15 PM AEST
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Well said, my friend. It is truly a good place to be.
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 05:30:36 PM AEST
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Broken wings -
Have left me flightless.
Selective vision -
Has rendered me sightless
A very appropriate rhyme, it is very cohesive to the rest of the write. Glad I had the privelage of reading this.
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