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Amongst the Stars
Contributed by
Phantomdream
on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 03:00:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sweet unborn love,
written among the stars,
surrounded by pale moonlight.
Couples dance among the stars,
until all fades to day.
The children laugh,
the children play,
amongst the sunlit stars.
Adults talk,
while they walk,
amongst the glowing stars.
Faeries fly,
way up high,
amongst the silver stars.
My heart it calls out to yours,
to meet me at the western shores,
amongst the lovelit stars.
Copyright ©
Phantomdream
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2005-02-13 15:00:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Amongst the Stars
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 04:41:45 PM AEST (User
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Well, Ms. Kell, it's a cute one....I think the expression got tangled up in it, but the lines are cute. |
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