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Bleeding just to cope...
Contributed by
Dying_Angel
on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 02:06:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Blood dripped from every pore
Or so it seemed
The white face staring back
Telling me it was for the best
Neck, wrist, ankle
In that order
She slashed away the pain
Sliced out the hurt
In, pull, out
Watching her
The movements so rhythimic
An expert in the art of pain
To watch a friend
Hurt so much is unbearable
But, i guess
She was bleeding just to cope...
*True story*
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Dying_Angel
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2005-02-13 14:06:04]
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Re: Bleeding just to cope...
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by Taurusgem1 on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 02:47:16 PM AEST
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| Very troubled girl. You can feel the unatural thoughts coming from her head. Good poem but you should definitely (if this is really a true story) get this girl some help. She will end up dying if she is not careful and to del with pain like that is not healthy.. I hope she gets the help she needs and is okay. |
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Re: Bleeding just to cope...
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 02:51:41 PM AEST
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Great poem...Suicide tends to be my topic of choice when I write too...
Sorry for the True story part...=[
Clark |
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