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Give and Take
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:37:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Nothing worth dieing for anymore
So I'd rather die
Feeling that this life is a sore
I'd rather give up, then try
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Nothing worth living for anymore
I'd rather not live
Feeling that death is what I'm looking for
I'll slit my wrists, and watch the blood sieve
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Because after I thought about it,
I noticed that life has no motive
Its a give and take thing
Except my life
Only goes in one motion
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I always Give
And you always Take
So I'll take the last thing
I have to give
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Without another thought
My life Ends
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-02-13 10:37:12]
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Re: Give and Take
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by Stonedraider23 on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 06:43:44 PM AEST
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| good write but hey write about what leads to these thoughts and feelings u know keep em comin i like |
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Re: Give and Take
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:39:48 PM AEST
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| this site makes me feel the same so many times. giving so much, and getting nothing. kind of pointless. so i broke the cycle for a while with an experiment with patrick. nothing is ever worth dying for. nothing is worth living for. so ill just resurrect you back like jesus, so you can post more =] |
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Re: Give and Take
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by xXcrossedXx on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:41:12 PM AEST
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Wonderful yet another beautiful poem. You have talent great piece, ill be waiting for more writes.
--amanda-- |
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