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The End
Contributed by
CodyJ
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Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:48:39 AM in AEST
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In the end,
all you have is your soul.
Your earthly possesions,
that vacant hole
in your heart
that you could never patch,
that tore you apart,
will all disappear,
in the end.
Did you have friends?
Memories for a euolagy,
that no one will speak?
Will there be anyone
to hear the creak
of the casket
as it shuts forever
losing you forever
to the dirt and the mud,
the insects and the bugs,
your real friends,
in the end.
All you got is your words,
your honor, your morals,
your legacy to last you,
what others take from that
shouldn't bother you,
because resting in the ground
your concerns are much simpler,
hell, they can hardly be found
in that coffin for keeps,
clutched in the devils palms
where eternity sleeps,
it can honestly be said,
that nothing matters,
in the end.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2005-02-13 09:48:39]
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Re: The End
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:58:06 AM AEST
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| I think this was a great poem it really got me thinking. I especially like your ending it came on strong and got the message across. |
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Re: The End
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by dtborchert on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:16:21 AM AEST
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| For some reason I thought of Eleanor Rigby by the beatles. Nice job. |
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Re: The End
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 08:23:34 PM AEST
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how true, what a powerful peice of writting, i'd
call this a true work of poetic art, ur a very
effective writter . . .
Dorian Chmabers |
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