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Poet's Rage
Contributed by
essentially9
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Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:40:35 PM in AEST
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Poet's Rage
Acidic rain
Stains the page
And my rage
Dulls this pain
Another work of art
Is torn apart
The ink's in disarray
And the page
Is now completely frayed
To the dullest gray
As the written heart
Stops beating in the work of art
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-02-12 23:40:35]
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Re: Poet's Rage
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:43:19 PM AEST
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| very good stuff Jennifer... keep it up! |
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Re: Poet's Rage
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:52:47 PM AEST
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| Short and powerfully effective. (I always tell people not to tick me off, since I'm a writer. Could be dangerous.) I like the way you bring all that anger to bear in a short write - like a bullet to the heart of the matter. Blessings. |
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Re: Poet's Rage
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by Nardo on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:56:27 PM AEST
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OOUCH! I felt that one. Powerful.
Nardo |
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Re: Poet's Rage
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by Xnoybis on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 12:13:51 AM AEST
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| I like this one. Short controlled bursts and right to the point. I also have a penchant for artists that destroy their own work, or at least the concept. |
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Re: Poet's Rage
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 12:21:20 AM AEST
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I think this is my favorite out of all your poems I've read...Masterful and beautiful Jennifer
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Re: Poet's Rage
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 02:31:23 AM AEST
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clever stuff especially the last two lines, great work.
Johnny. |
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Re: Poet's Rage
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by killingmehslowly on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:39:43 AM AEST
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| oh. I really like this one. Powerful and it gets right to the point. Another beautiful write. |
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