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With You
Contributed by
LaDyD
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Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:24:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Being with you
Made me someone new
The things you would say
Would brighten up my day
Having you by my side
Like you were my guide
Baby you are so fine
I cant believe your all mine
When I look into your eyes
You were better than all the guys
When Im near you, Im so tempted to touch
You know I cant hold back, I want you so much
When you smile your dimples drive me crazy
Everything around just gets hazy
I thought that love had died
Until you changed what I felt inside
The way I feel for you
Cant be anymore true
I promise to be there wherever you are
In your heart Im never to far
Copyright ©
LaDyD
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2005-02-12 23:24:41]
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Re: With You
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by O7NeVeS on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 11:04:58 PM AEST
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| Wow Baby, you really wrote an awesome poem. I absolutely loved it. Maybe i like it so much b/c it's about me, and u have always made me feel so special. I don't know what to say, i'm glad i got you to start writing poetry! I like how u squeezed our song in! LoL anyway, keep writing... I miss you!! TD |
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Re: With You
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by Stellar on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:07:57 AM AEST
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This is such a cute poem, and the fact that he read it and commented on it is even cuter!
Good luck to the two of you!!!
Take Care~ Stellar |
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