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**Come A Lil' Closer**
Contributed by
crazypoetchick461990
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Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:14:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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* I need to hear your calming voice* *to feel your silky touch* *I need to hear those soothing words* *I'm missing you so much* *I want to see the way you move* *like poetry in motion* *I want to see your body once more* *(and maybe add some lotion ;) )* *I miss the way you hold me close* *the way you bring me cheer* *so come a lil' closer baby* *I need you right here* *come a lil' closer* *and show your love is true* *come a lil' closer baby *because right now I'm missin' you**
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Re: **Come A Lil' Closer**
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:16:32 PM AEST (User
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awww... that was very sweetly written. could use some help presentation-wise though. Stanzas are your friend. :) |
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Re: **Come A Lil' Closer**
(User Rating: 1 ) by JennyFruFru on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 02:25:29 AM AEST (User
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how cute :) |
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