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Romeo, How Could You?
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 09:31:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Romeo, dear Romeo
How could you leave so soon?
Left me behind, left me to grieve
Now your Juliet has an open wound
How could you lie to me?
Tell me Romeo, why?
Of all the things to keep secret
You chose to hide that you would die
How could you keep on acating,
As if nothing would go wrong?
Now I don't know what to do
You're really gone
Romeo, oh Romeo
It's you I hope to find
But how, my love, could you be so cruel
And leave your Juliet behind
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2005-02-12 21:31:35]
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Re: Romeo, How Could You?
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 09:35:48 PM AEST
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Great poem...Very heart felt
Sorry for your loss...
Clark |
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Re: Romeo, How Could You?
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 09:36:57 PM AEST
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| wow, I really loved this write. Sorry for your loss. Maybe he loved you too much to tell you, I can understand how much that would hurt though. |
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Re: Romeo, How Could You?
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by pixie on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 09:37:47 PM AEST
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that was really moving and sad Im so sorry *hugs*
pix xx |
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Re: Romeo, How Could You?
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by Stonedraider23 on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 09:53:45 PM AEST
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| Great write hope you will love again |
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Re: Romeo, How Could You?
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:09:51 PM AEST
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| Give the boy the benefit of the doubt. Maybe just maybe he was hoping for a miracle. Sorry for the loss may his spirit stay with you always...We all lose loved ones, read mine called Gene and Lucy Birdsong, I lost my friend almost 2 years ago. Gene Birdsong. |
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Re: Romeo, How Could You?
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by Psyche on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:11:10 PM AEST
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| Thank you for sharing with us this expression of your grief. We hurt with you. |
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Re: Romeo, How Could You?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:18:02 PM AEST
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| I'm deeply sorry for your loss. Beautiful poem....It's terribly sad |
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Re: Romeo, How Could You?
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by Rxqueen on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:57:59 PM AEST
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| This is a very deeply moving piece. So tragic, like Romeo and Julliete. Great job. I am sorry for your loss sweetie. |
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Re: Romeo, How Could You?
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:33:11 AM AEST
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So sorry for your loss. A beautiful poem. He will live on always in your heart.
((((HUGS)))))
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: Romeo, How Could You?
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by Scarlett on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 05:38:33 AM AEST
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| very moving and well expressed. i'm sorry for your loss. |
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Re: Romeo, How Could You?
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by tx_graffiti_gal on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:08:05 AM AEST
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| I need a hankie all I can say. |
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