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wings of a dream
Contributed by
aprilrose
on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 07:27:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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lost in a dream of being free..
spredding my own two wings..
flying so free away from the past..
away from the jail that i have entered.
starting fresh and new in a life of no rules
living for myself and no one else..
this life is a jail a cell it takes me in..
never letting go till my life turns into a bitter hatefull end.
it keeps me from my pleasent dream and takes me to a place of chains and scars..
scars of pain and depressive anger screams of tourture in every corner.
in my dreams i am a beutiful eagle flying so free with passionate wings
making a life for me so true no more chains just peace forever in a dream so free that is where you will find me.
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aprilrose
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2005-02-12 19:27:13]
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Re: wings of a dream
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by greeneyes on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:41:29 PM AEST
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They say dreams can come true. Freedom from those chains sounds good to me.
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Re: wings of a dream
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by sojourner on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 12:17:12 AM AEST
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interesting poem,I like the way it starts out as you soar unto the heavens but are awakened from your dreams by the realities of life.
sojourner
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Re: wings of a dream
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by secretwind on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 02:27:53 AM AEST
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dreams sweet sweet dreams
nice flow |
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Re: wings of a dream
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by Caged Soul on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 04:12:00 AM AEST
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What I like about your work is that there are so many similarities in the way you write and what you write about, compared to mine. It's almost asif I'm reading one of my own stuff. I guess it's because of that why I am so drawn to your work.
Great poem, just check the spelling carefully before you submit, and it will be even more great.
See ya
Ash~ |
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