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Not Knowing
Contributed by
positivelypurple
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Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 07:12:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Tiptoeing around in my mind
Footsteps trailing behind
Wondering if I should fall
Or not go there at all.
Doors have slammed throughout my life
Despite my loyalty and strife.
Walking on eggshells I am beat
Not sure whether to advance or retreat.
Timing in the past has been my curse.
Just not knowing is the worst.
How can I find the strength to be real?
And confide in him exactly how I feel?
Wandering in circles now looking for the light.
Why should I play games when it feels so right?
A clear path I’ve found and it’s headed for the door.
The universe holds endless possibilities to explore.
Will he respond and step up to the plate?
Or could he be a coward afraid to take the bait?
I’ll be locked in this dungeon until he lets me go.
Whatever the outcome, at least I’ll finally know.
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2005-02-12 19:12:42]
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Re: Not Knowing
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 07:16:25 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I've felt this way so many times before. It's a difficult situation, but it really is better to know than to spend life wondering. :-) |
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Re: Not Knowing
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by BrandySwanson on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 07:25:10 PM AEST
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this poem was so awesome loved it and it can be a very difficult situation @ times. I've also felt like this before. great job on writting this one and thank you so much for your wonderful comment on the rose.
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