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Confessions of a Romantic
Contributed by
cheerchix06
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Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 06:06:37 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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His mahogany eyes, his locks of gold-
One day his hand I hope to hold.
His pearly smile, it shines like the sun,
And I look at him, and I know he's the one.
All through the night while I lie in bed
Visions and dreams of him crawl in my head
But shall I be sorrowed or shall I be delighted?
Shall my ever-strengthening love be requited?
Obsession, possession-am I insane?
Is this love real, or simply inane?
I do not know now, perhaps I never will,
But I cannot help myself-I love him still.
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Re: Confessions of a Romantic
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by Hooker on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 06:12:20 PM AEST
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good choice of words first off.
also u can feel the emotion to this which gives it the extra edge.
nice job |
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Re: Confessions of a Romantic
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by bethie on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 07:10:07 PM AEST
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| Yeah, I feel your pain. Heartfelt emotion in this. Nice. |
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Re: Confessions of a Romantic
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by positivelypurple on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 07:19:47 PM AEST
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| I just posted a very similar poem. It is the not knowing that really gets under your skin. You can feel something so strong and then the person turns out to be full of it. Tragic really. Hope yours works out in your favor!! Wonderful write!! |
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Re: Confessions of a Romantic
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by bffallt on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 08:39:22 PM AEST
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| This is a very good poem.I think I am in love with this guy named Travis G.When I see him my rolls with rumble.This guy I love you explain him just how he looks and how I feel about him.GOOD LUCK.You are my best friend |
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