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What Do You See?
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:18:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Tell me
Do you notice my resiliance
I give to my heart
When you touch me?
I try not to like your touch
The feel of you skin on mine
Your fingers send shivers
Rippiling down my spine
I hate you
You always try to make me love you
Then when I give in, You break me
I am sick of you
Rubbing your hand on my arm
Give up
Three times I've fallen
For your evil tricks
I don't need you anymore
I won't listen to the feelings running through my body at your touch
Just stop
I don't want to deal
Just stop running your fingers through my hair
I don't want to be hurt again
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2005-02-12 15:18:34]
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Re: What Do You See?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 04:20:27 PM AEST
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| I really, really enjoyed this write. I can relate to it, and I sensed your emotion in this poem. Excellent work! |
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Re: What Do You See?
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 05:36:36 PM AEST
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| excellent work tsubaki (hopes i spelled your name at least somewhat correct). =] but that is nothing new, talent is within in. |
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Re: What Do You See?
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 01:02:44 PM AEST
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| I can really relate, good job breaking away. Great poem. |
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