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Didn't want to fall in love
Contributed by
mylady
on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:17:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I didn't want to fall in love.
I didn't want to feel what love is.
love come when you don't wanted.
it come and take your heart make it
beat again.
Tear come down wanting him to be near.
I didn't want to fall in love nor tear
roll down my cheek .
knowing i will never be with him.
My tear will feel my heart and wash my heart.
Leaving a piece of him to remember him by.
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2005-02-12 15:17:30]
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Re: Didn't want to fall in love
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by DesolantDreamer on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:23:27 PM AEST
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| I know this all to well. It sucks. YOu just don't want to feel the pain of one-sided love and so you put your heart on a shelf, hoping love won't get to it there but then he walks over and takes it down and steps on it. Sucks doesn't it. |
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Re: Didn't want to fall in love
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:30:05 PM AEST
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Nice write. Your english is not very good though.
Just some suggestions to help you improve this piece:
I didn't want to fall in love.
I didn't want to feel what love is.
love came when I didn't want it .
it comes and takes your heart and makes it
beat again.
Tears come down wanting him to be near.
I didn't want to fall in love nor have tears
roll down my cheek .
knowing i will never be with him.
My tears will feel my heart and wash my heart.
Leaving a piece of him to remember
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Re: Didn't want to fall in love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 04:31:19 PM AEST
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| Too bad we can't control who we fall in love with. good job. |
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Re: Didn't want to fall in love
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by inoc on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 08:16:50 AM AEST
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....a sad piece of poetry..
hope things work out for you soon and your heart will be happy
cheers!~
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