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WHAT MORE SHOULD I ASK

Contributed by CRAZ2 on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:12:07 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



I have been given someone to confide in
Someone to laugh with in good times
Someone to cry with in hard times
I have been given someone to let me vent my anger
Let me tell my fears to and dreams to
I have been given someone who understands when I can’t talk
Because the words just aren’t there
I have been given the chance to be me
Silly goofy and caring and sensual and free spirited
I have been given the chance to build a little confidence
To stand tall and be proud of what I am
I have been given someone that believes in me
Someone that trusts in me
I have been given someone who understands my emotions
Good bad and ugly
I have been given someone who wants to make me
Happy the best way he can the and the only way he thinks he can
Why ask for more
Because you have shown me what we can
Be together if we only take the chance




Copyright © CRAZ2 ... [ 2005-02-12 15:12:07]
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Re: WHAT MORE SHOULD I ASK (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 04:34:09 PM AEST
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Very sweet write! I wish I had someone like that in my life...


Re: WHAT MORE SHOULD I ASK (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 06:48:08 PM AEST
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Don't you just love that feeling? I know I do. I love being in love so deeply like this.
You've really described that love-to-be-in-love-with-you feeling. Very very well written. Thank you for sharing.

Lots of love and peace be with you,

chelsea


Re: WHAT MORE SHOULD I ASK (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 11:51:44 AM AEST
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Having someone that will accept you for who you are, in good times and bad, and in between too is something/ someone that should be cherished. Beautiful write.


Re: WHAT MORE SHOULD I ASK (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 01:24:52 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, I'm glad you found someone, you're very lucky.




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