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Grounded but Far Away
Contributed by
CARAAAAA
on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 02:57:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Thud thud thud
drop the pugnacious stones
to the bottom of the sea bed
as collated sand flounders
and then settles
its insatiable impatience fettered away
Thud thud thud
goes the heart
as the stones form depressions
hollow curvatures that emphasize
the latent and unerring silence
emblazoned across the splendorous underwater world
like an intrinsic and defining caption.
The ocean air is dense but lacks no subtlety indeed.
Pull me away from you for I am drowning
It weighs me down so that I can no longer breathe
Where is the puritan air of reckless abandon?
Copyright ©
CARAAAAA
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2005-02-12 14:57:01]
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Re: Grounded but Far Away
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:01:50 PM AEST
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This is fabulous. Fantastic. You've got quite the fitting vocabulary. Broad enough to say exactly what you want in as few words as possible. You've got this down to an art, my dear. This is wonderful.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
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Re: Grounded but Far Away
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:08:09 PM AEST
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| I love it, I've always loved your poems and your non-comprimising style. Keep it up. |
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Re: Grounded but Far Away
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 04:10:55 PM AEST
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| well done , enjoyed it |
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