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Memories That'll Never Be
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 01:49:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Your life wastes away
Tempted but afraid
Every day
Your life fades away
Haunted but alone
In every way
Your life thrown away
Wounded but not broken
With no say
Your life taken away
Ended but not undone
without dismay
You took you own life
With a gun...
Yesterday
Without knowing what
It would do to me
I took my life too
Now both our families
Only have
Memories that'll
Never Be
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Of The Misunderstood You
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And The Invisible me
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-02-12 13:49:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Memories That'll Never Be
(User Rating: 1 ) by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 02:06:40 PM AEST (User
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This is beautifully written, truly beautiful. It makes the softer sort of sad that comes with suicide vivid and all I can do to describe this feeling is use colors: a cool, calm blue.
My favorite part?
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Of The Misunderstood You
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And The Invisible me
This is sheer beauty. Bravo and encore.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Memories That'll Never Be
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:56:03 PM AEST (User
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ah yes, ive written quite a few hundred of these, lol. this was very well done clark. the last line made this more unique than most of these type poems (thanks for making me unoriginal =]) and that made this all the much better for it. |
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Re: Memories That'll Never Be
(User Rating: 1 ) by heartbroken4ever on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 07:25:11 PM AEST (User
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I love this poem
it's great clark
Just remember
that i love you
Love you,
Amber |
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Re: Memories That'll Never Be
(User Rating: 1 ) by xXcrossedXx on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:46:36 PM AEST (User
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This is a great poem! Why was everyone rating so low! I can really relate to the poems you write, the flow was good and the meaning was clear. Nice write.
--amanda-- |
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