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Enslaved
Contributed by
Bleeding_Nightmares
on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:22:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Enslaved
I fear the creaking floor
Steps approaching my door
Alcohol fumes preceding dread
He comes to play in my bed
Fresh blood will run tonight
Chained to the posts I cant even fight
My lips and eyes stitched shut
Festering maggots feast in my cuts
My living hell spread wide
His sickness spewing inside
I am a slave and his child
For him to continuously defile.
By Bleeding_Nightmares
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Bleeding_Nightmares
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2005-02-12 11:22:09]
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Re: Enslaved
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:35:23 AM AEST
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| An extremely powerful and emotional write. I was captured by your words. Very vivid and deep visualizations. Excellent write. |
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Re: Enslaved
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by Sk8ergrl_911 on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 12:40:03 PM AEST
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Wow,
Very very well written, very descriptive, I love it |
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Re: Enslaved
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 02:49:01 PM AEST
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What a dark write, this was just awesome. I am in lack of words on how to describe this. Well done on this amazing write.
Jane x |
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Re: Enslaved
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:13:39 PM AEST
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The dark sense and power of this poem make it very prominant. I like the way you've written about this in such a way that you'd think it were your own story even though it's just something you've heard of.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Enslaved
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by Loche on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:13:13 PM AEST
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| As otheres have stated before me, I like how you visualized you were in that situation.. Awesome work! |
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Re: Enslaved
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 05:51:00 AM AEST
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You have encaptured the darkness of macabre, pain and hollowness, with a simple scribble of your pen. This is a universal fear, widespread and infectious.
An intriguing muse.
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Re: Enslaved
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 10:10:15 PM AEST
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| you have immense talent, no reason to limit yourself in topics. =] |
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