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Open Heart
Contributed by
foxwillow
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Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:30:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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open heart looks and see's a remote view into the distance alive and intuitve, sparks of light dance in her vision,
silver threads of emotion flow like smoke signals twisting and turning, they make shapes and fade into nothing, but the afterglow remains in her spirit. could be this be a sign?
Open heart, closes her eyes and remembers the warm feelings of the silver threads that warmed her needy heart, reluctant and sometimes fearful of taking chances with her emotions, she is a complex creature.
Open heart, stands on the edge of a cliff way up high away from any harm, she wears a white flowing gown of innocence, pure and light, bare foot she stands feeling the soft earth under her feet she feels safe. with her right hand she reaches out into the pale blue and with her left hand touching her spirit, she connects to her inner child to find the truth.
Open heart, she stands feeling the warm sun beating down on her face soft breeze playing with her raven tresses. she takes a deep breath in then screams, dark threads leave her letting go of the pain that darkened her spirit, never again will she let negativity influence her, she trusts in truth, no longer blinded by ignorance, no longer living her life in vain, she walks alone, finding beauty in simple things.
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Re: Open Heart
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:42:59 AM AEST
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| Excellent write, much depth reached and well decribed, beautifully written poem. |
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Re: Open Heart
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:23:25 PM AEST
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I wish it were as simple as:
she takes a deep breath in then screams, dark threads leave her letting go of the pain that darkened her spirit, never again will she let negativity influence her, she trusts in truth, no longer blinded by ignorance, no longer living her life in vain, she walks alone, finding beauty in simple things.
I wish I could be this open heart.
This poem is...
perfect
It's sheer brilliance and it's wonderful and awesome and amazing and there's SO much imagery and a buzzing emotional feeling throughout the entire thing.
You've worked wonders with this art, friend.
Bravo and encore.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
chelsea |
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Re: Open Heart
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 04:25:03 PM AEST
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| Great piece!! |
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