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In The Logic Of Dreams
Contributed by
bohemian_with_a_pen
on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 02:07:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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In the logic of dreams
This honey orange sunset would be a sunset after all
Instead of an ancient weatherboard house bellowing its fire song.
The flames make the grass blush and shy away, reeking of petrol perfume and long forgotten promises.
(Seared like acid on her mind)
The houses around it shiver into momentary wakefulness before sinking back into sleep, in the early hours of Sunday morning.
(The wind whispers its sympathy)
Shards of glass dance around her feet like falling raindrops, and the golden angel sigh’s an aching tune of splintering wood with her hot breath.
(She just wanted to love herself)
Why did it have to come to this?
The thought is heavier than lead
So she lets it fall
As her body spreads like soft butter over the stairs.
(The relic of her cry fades on the wind until it is nothing)
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Re: In The Logic Of Dreams
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by weepingprophet on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:01:46 AM AEST
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art- you spoke a picture into existance, as though with breath you can paint murals. your confidance and foundation, unwavering. i read the last line with courage, with dare. another lingering image, resilient and breathtaking. we are all dead in the stairwell of eternity.
~i do not believe in your confessed love, until your hands around my throat, screaming promises. Since then i have no doubt, only temptation~weepingprophet |
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Re: In The Logic Of Dreams
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by Bleeding_Nightmares on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:46:48 AM AEST
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| Full on and well described poem, excellent write. |
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Re: In The Logic Of Dreams
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 06:25:33 PM AEST
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This seems to whirl across a movie screen in front of me with a carefree dance-like rhythm. I love the artful way you've described all of this. The scene is extraordinary. Brilliant.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: In The Logic Of Dreams
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by Red_October on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 11:23:04 AM AEST
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| Your words are like a watercolor in slow motion breathing the life out even through me fathoming her death. You are an amazing artist with your poetry. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: In The Logic Of Dreams
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 06:14:11 AM AEST
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The wording and phrases you've used here are very nice...
made me feel warm but sad at the same time for some reason. I enjoyed reading this, I will have to read more. Thank you for your comments.
xXx |
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Re: In The Logic Of Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 12:51:13 AM AEST
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this is so beautiful, ive always become lost within yours words, may you always have a poem in your heart my friend, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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