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Hating You
Contributed by
XxCrYiNg4YoUxX
on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 10:57:36 PM in AEST
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When I think of Hating you
I think of a chunk of my heart falling,shattering
to peices,My heart breaks feeling like a fragile glass as it was thrown
from my trembling hands then i cry, like never before not knowing why.
What I know is how i feel,that feeling is not as it should but in total diffrence
instead of the hatered I want to feel, I have nothing for you but the
deepset love like has always been,
You swore you felt the same, what i didnt know was at that moment I
became a part of your childish little game so many girls have played
I thought together we were diffrent, but as we went along i figured we
are all the same.
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XxCrYiNg4YoUxX
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2005-02-11 22:57:36]
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Re: Hating You
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 01:30:26 AM AEST
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This is a great write. It might've been a little easier to read if it was more structured, but that's just me. I liked this.
Hating someone takes up too much energy, so don't try to do it. He's not worth it. :-) |
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Re: Hating You
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 02:34:37 AM AEST
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I have to agree with Marisa on this one.
Structured is easier to read.
Like Marisa said he's not worth it don't waste ur time on him |
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