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My End
Contributed by
breakaway2feel
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Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 10:11:21 PM in AEST
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I am all that is gone
I am all that has past
I am forever a distant memory a faded glass
I have forgotten all hope
I have forgotten my truth
I have given up all that is pure and once good
I know nothing but pain
I know all of your fears
I know everything evil, dead, and unreal
I am once but a woman
I am once a good friend
I am now but a shadow stuck in what was my end
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Re: My End
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by tbirdsupercoupe on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 11:21:48 PM AEST
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All I can say is your words really have lots of meaning and depth to them... I can feel your emotions though it.. Its a great poem..
James... |
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Re: My End
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by seebs on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 01:30:21 AM AEST
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| Great poem... I can fell you here, Everybody feels depression sometimes always remember there is always somebody that feels the same way or worse your not the only on and it's NOT hopless... you have got to let yourself forgive those that have hurt you in the past, I know it's hard, but it will make things a lot easier as you grow emotionally |
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Re: My End
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by ArseCrust on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 07:04:09 AM AEST
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| this is really deep and dark but excellent |
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Re: My End
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by broken_cookie on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 05:24:54 PM AEST
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| hey i really like this. i can really relate to what youre writing in this poem. love it keep it up ttyl byes! |
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