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Who Am I?
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 08:03:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I look in the mirror
A girl I never met looks back
I have everything I want
I have everything I need
But yet I don't know
Who is looking at me in the mirror
The empty blue eyes
Etched in my mind
Why, though she is smiling
Her eyes hold so much pain?
Does she not know who she is either?
I feel like a stranger in my own body
Who am I?
What am I?
Why don't I feel like I belong?
Where do I belong?
So many questions
So little answers
I've wondered, wandered through life,
Seeking the answers
And here I am
Looking back at myself
And I feel like I don't know me.
Who am I?
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2005-02-11 20:03:32]
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Re: Who Am I?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 08:16:33 PM AEST
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| beautifully writen, a struggle i can only hope everyone goes thru at some time. mirrors suck dont they? |
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Re: Who Am I?
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by afterdark on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 08:26:19 PM AEST
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| One I can never relate to..But a very good and very strong post..Good job.. |
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Re: Who Am I?
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 08:57:53 PM AEST
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| the answer isnt important, the journey is. |
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Re: Who Am I?
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by Evilnn on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 01:06:36 AM AEST
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D-Dreamer, I can certainly understand where you are coming from and I am very impressed on the way you expressed sorrow and confusion about yoursel----Boy do i relate.
I have submitted a few poems relating- 0nly if interested maybe check them out...
THE STRANGER WITHIN...
LOST HOPE
Rember you are not alone!!!!!
Eve
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Re: Who Am I?
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by weepingprophet on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 02:48:54 AM AEST
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Opinion- there is not "who you are" and "who you are not" you are breathing, hurting, refusing to give in to life's suicide. you are potential, the use is your choice. who we are is irrelevant, an unanswerable question. wanderers maybe, hopeless we are characterized and dominated by our flaws.
you stirred feeling inside of me, what it would be categorized as is irrelevant. continue to search for the unanswerable questions, we are all circles.
~ i am pain, what brings me to my knees is thanks that i can still feel something.~weepingprophet
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Re: Who Am I?
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by Sensommar on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 02:52:32 PM AEST
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I know that feeling
I often ask myself that
I think that you describe that feeling in an excelent way, how it is to be a stranger to yourself With love Pia |
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