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Nightmare
Contributed by
TornApart
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Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:42:45 PM in AEST
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it comes back and haunts me in my dreams again and again,
seeing everything that happened,collecting back all the pain.
laying there pretending to be asleep.
whilst in my bedroom u would creep,
calling my name to see if id respond,
thinking that i was asleep, floating in the clouds and beyond,
running your hands over my young bare skin,
screaming,crying so loudly deep within.
no one could hear me no one knew,
all this pain u put me thru.
my young violated body was left laying on that bed wishing that this wouldnt happen again wishin i was dead
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2005-02-11 19:42:45]
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Re: Nightmare
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:44:48 PM AEST
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| Wow....I'm speechless. |
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Re: Nightmare
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by afterdark on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:54:01 PM AEST
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| wITH THIS SUBJECT YOU PERHAPS SHOULD have got more graphic..Now that is my simple thought on it..Child molesting..Interesting topic..A bit bare in some places and the grammer was off a bit..Overall it was a good write..My tasTe is a bit more graphic so I would have made it a tad more horrible.. |
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Re: Nightmare
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by TornApart on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 08:12:14 PM AEST
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| alright for the person who sed this should have been more graphic.....why the hell would u want to go into more detail about child molesting?!?! |
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Re: Nightmare
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:18:04 PM AEST
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| good poem. i like the less graphic ones.... |
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Re: Nightmare
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by Evilnn on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 10:10:03 PM AEST
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Unfortunately Tornapart, I can relate so well
Well we did survive some how
now we just have to try to overcome
I know it's hard- Im still trying to survive
Well hang in there sweetie
My heart goes out to you
Take care
Eve
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