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Just the two of us
Contributed by
heartbroken4ever
on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:33:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It's just the two of us alone in this world
Just us a boy and a girl
We know each other well
more than anyone can tell
We talk every day
and write to each other when we have more to say
We both know the world is full of fakes
and its more than either one of us can take
We both wish we could die
and know that no one will miss us or cry
We both hate our lives
and the pain cuts us like knives
We wish we could escape
to a place where we know we'd be safe
It's like we're trapped in a dream
and no one can hear us scream
There's no way out
and that we'll never doubt
Toghter alone
without a home.
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heartbroken4ever
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2005-02-11 19:33:13]
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Re: Just the two of us
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:37:43 PM AEST
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Yes amber...I really enjoyed this one...I wonder why...;)
Im glad I could help with the title..
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Re: Just the two of us
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:43:03 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this write. It had a nice flow, and it's emotional. Good job. |
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Re: Just the two of us
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:21:49 PM AEST
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| excellence and brilliance. |
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