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straight to the piont!
Contributed by
morgana
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Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 06:13:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Death seems so welcoming today
Copyright ©
morgana
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2005-02-11 18:13:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: straight to the piont!
(User Rating: 1 ) by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 06:20:23 PM AEST (User
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Is this poetry?....
"Death seems so welcoming today"
Ummm.. Ok... wow..
Im impressed by your one line
Not really much I can say....
Death can be welcomeing any day
But life....Well its now so don't waste it Away
Clark |
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Re: straight to the piont!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nazmythian on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 06:20:28 PM AEST (User
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Death seems to always welcome and beckon ... but he is patient ... he'll still be there ... why not make him wait on you ?
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: straight to the piont!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhymingron on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 06:34:13 PM AEST (User
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Life is short, death is forever. |
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Re: straight to the piont!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Psyche on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 06:47:17 PM AEST (User
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Comment? Very morbid and...yes... too the point. |
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Re: straight to the piont!
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:33:56 PM AEST (User
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Hmm,,You know on a normal basis if I was sexualy frustrated I may diss this one due to the shortness of it..However given the fact I did get laid today I will say I do like this one alot..The fact that you can more or less give a big screw you to ppl I really dig...Good girl.. |
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